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wow, thanks. I seriously considered a second draft very soon, with your advice in mind. I'll post another story soon, then I'll rewrite the BBQ Sauce story. I think you will like the retelling.
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"The physical body is acknowledged as dust, the personal drama as delusion. It is as if the world we perceive through our senses, that whole gorgeous and terrible pageant, were the breath-thin surface of a bubble, and everything else, inside and outside, is pure radiance. Both suffering and joy come then like a brief reflection, and death like a pin" Stephen Mitchell
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