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Sweet, this is like Christams for me. I've been away from these characters for about a week now, stories always come across so shitty when you come back to them after awhile. This is my first real experience in writing such a short story (it was an assignment for school) and I can not describe how valuable your input is to me. I have two more stories coming up, an 8 page and another 2 page then all my final drafts, so now that I know at least one person is actually reading these things maybe I'll post the one of the others (both of the story lines would probably be suitable though) Oh well, thanks Doctor F., you've just cheered me up a little.
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"The physical body is acknowledged as dust, the personal drama as delusion. It is as if the world we perceive through our senses, that whole gorgeous and terrible pageant, were the breath-thin surface of a bubble, and everything else, inside and outside, is pure radiance. Both suffering and joy come then like a brief reflection, and death like a pin" Stephen Mitchell
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