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maybe I'm the only one who doesn't like seeing "violence erupts" at the beginning of a logline.

I think parolee is a very stupid word and would use ex-con because that's what action fans want to see and judging by the first log line, bruce willis is in this one.

my version:

a guilt-ridden ex-con finds his life in jeopardy when he crosses paths with the dangerous residents of his new halfway house. struggling to survive a personal hell, he finds an unlikely chance at redemption through a prostitute's daughter.

I don't know, it's a little long. I'm thinking the story is about a murderer who is trying to get his life back on track, but he can't get the murder victim out of his head. being in a halfway house full of violent criminals only reminds him of the person he hates the most.


the people do want to see violence in big bold letters, gotta give the people what the want afterall :)