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Old 01-19-2010, 06:37 AM
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The summary is okay, but the ending should be darker. Bad guys going to jail is too cliche.

Depending on the length of the film and quality of the video, I might be interested in checking it out based on this description.

The trailer is the same you already asked for comments on, is it not? I already told you what I think you need to do to fix it.

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