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I give it a B+.

The story is well done. Kudos for your expert camerawork, editing and lighting. All show a professional level of artistry. Thank god this wasn't another handheld amateur effort. The care you put into this is evident.

Likewise, the acting was excellent, particularly for an amateur production. The story was well told and internally consistent. The surprise was actually surprising.

My only disappointment was the animated intro. It's generic and lifeless. The hands movement is random- it doesn't synch with the speech. The dialogue is too long and tells too much. The set itself is simplistic and undefined. IMO you should just film a live intro- you have the talent, why not be consistent?

One of the best efforts of this type I've seen. Congratulations.