There's some potential here, but honestly dude...nobody's going to pay $1000 for that.
It really does look like the work or 2 different artists - and it suffers by between trapped between visions. If you went full out with either the abstract qualities that parts of it are displaying or the more realistic feel it has in places, you might have something cool.
As is, it looks like you either wanted to do something offbeat and couldn't figure out what to do with the body, or vice-versa: you wanted to do something realistic, decided you couldn't pull it off, and finished in a rush.
Like I say...it's not utterly terrible by any means. But I'd be more interested in seeing something more coherant.
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