Hey i got an idea for a movie called Slammed (any other suggestions)

Opening Scene: Camera focused on lights on roof flickering. There is screaming in the distant. Camera slowly moves off roof to show a long hallway. You here water dripping somewhere.

Next Scene: Man in a room tied down on floor.
Man being tortured: Arghhh!
Man keeps screaming in pain. After about 10 secs a door opens
Man being tortured stops screaming.
Camera shows mans feet walking slowly towards him.
Torturer 1: I thought I told you to be quiet (Very serious voice).
Man being tortured: Please. (sobbing) Please just let me go.
Torturer keeps walking towards him.
Man being tortured: (Yells) What do you want from me!
Now another door opens (Man jumps) and another man walks in. Camera on his feet.
Man being tortured: (yelling) NO! NO! NO!
Both torturers getting close. Man continues to yell.
Both men get to him.
Torturer 2: (waves) Bye Bye
Torturer 2 has a rake and he rests the spikes of the rake on his face.
Man being tortured: continues sobbing and screaming NOOOOO!
Torturer 1 stamps on rake. Rake goes graphically in his face and blood sprays on the wall to spell Slammed. (Very tense and loud jumpy music).