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Overall, I'll give it a good.
The exposition it too obvious- "So what are we doing?" .. "We're hired to pick up something from this house" ... Just SHOW US- fill us in later on what's going on. It's far more intriguing and mysterious if we don't know what's going on.
Some of these guys aren't wearing gloves. HELLO?
Too much with the hand held camera already- get a tripod and learn how to setup effective shots.
Nice beginning but could be better.
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