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Ferret- an interesting take on werewolves. A bit muddled and complicated, but you'll have plenty of time to work that out in a novel. Good marks for originality.

Rayne- Plenty of gruesome touches here. Definitely a product of your twisted mind. There's no mention made of the man being concerned about his girlfriend's death- he makes to attempt to bargain for getting her life restored. The man comes off as selfish and unsympathetic. Perhaps this is what you intended in order to make his ultimate punishment more fitting. A good effort.