Fantastic job, MM!
I agree with Bwind with the pics of the cute animals (I know it sounds corny, but in terms of viewership you want to pull on the heartstrings of animal lovers). I think that you need to cut in some kitten and puppy pics a little sooner in the interview to get the audience's attention. I think it's great that you cut in posters and signs of the shelter, but I think that introducing the animals sooner will work well too.
This was great, though. Awesome!!
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