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Congrats on the publication.

I believe in this paragraph:

I will most likely be accused of viewing the past through rose colored glasses; it's not like most of these things were just attempts by soulless corporations to make money. Of course they were,

You mean "it's not like most of these things wereN'T just attempts" ...

That way what you're saying makes sense.....

I hope it doesn't seem like I'm picking on you- mistakes in published works are a pet peeve of mine.