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Old 10-21-2008, 07:29 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by fortunato View Post
In a dark graveyard,
Two shadows dance among stones;
Mists of former love.
Love the imagery :)


Quote:
Originally Posted by urgeok2 View Post
head in the toilet
stares up with watery eyes
one flush goodby head
I would probably appreciate the imagery of this one more, if I could get past the thought of 'This would clog your toilet'...lol
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