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Old 05-21-2008, 01:13 PM
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The camera shows a small carnival. There's a small ferris wheel, a small roller coaster and the other usual carnival attractions. Miss Macabre is walks along a road until she reaches it. She's wearing gothic clothes and her hair is covering her face. She passes a group of girls about her age.

Girl #1: Hey freak, Nice clothes. But I think you're too late to return them. The zoo closed about an hour ago.

Girl #2: Yeh. You're shirt really brings out your eyes. Shame. Would have been a nice shirt.

Miss Macabre: Shut up.

The group of girls walk forward so they're in front of her.

Girl #2: What was that?

Miss Macabre: Meekly I said shutup. You're only acting like that because you've slept with half the town.

Girl #2: What? At least I've slept with someone at all.

Miss Macabre: Stop being such a bitch.

The girl slaps Miss Macabre. Miss Macabre Tries to slap her back but some of the other, larger girl step infront and her hand seems to bounce off them.

Miss Macabre: Shit...

One of the larger girls punches her. She turns around and starts running but trips over. She falls to the floor. The large girls walk over and start kicking her. The other girls are laughing.

Miss Macabre: Help!

Nobody comes to her aid. Suddenly, Massacre Man's De Lorean speeds down the road. It pulls up beside her. Massacre Man gets out.

Massacre Man: Leave her alone.

Large girl #1: Or what?

Girl #2: Yeh. What are you gonna do. You're just that loser who used to work in K-Mart.

Massacre Man: I said, get the fuck off her.

Girl #2: And she said, or what?

Massacre Man: Are you...are you Jenna? Jenna26?

Girl #2: How do you know my name?

Massacre Man: You're my old friend Alky from K-Marts daughter. That's how you knew me.

Girl #2: No I'm not.

Massacre Man: Yeh you are. You're the little bitch who nearly bled himdry of cash. I have him on speed dial. He'll probably find it funny. Let me just call him. He'll get the joke.

He gets out his Cell Phone.

Jenna: Girls...Scatter!

All the girls run away. Massacre Man pulls Miss Macabre to her feet.

Miss macabre: Thanks.

Massacre Man: No problem. Good to see you've come to the carnival. Those whores wont bother you for a while.

Miss Macabre: You wanna go on the roller coaster?

Massacre Man: Sure. I don't have anything else to do here.

The shot goes to infront of them, as they're walking forward, Jenna appears in the back ground. She walks out of a small alley way, and crouches beside a hedge infront of a house, the hedge hides the garden. As the two of them walk forward, Jenna slowly creeps out, still watching them. All of a sudden, a huge tentacle like things shoots out over the hedge and down, grabs her, and pulls her back into the garden. The hedge rustles but what's happening can't be seen.
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