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Originally Posted by newb
Very nice B.
The only thing I would change is the discription of Katie when Brandon finds her. I would leave out the "stunning" part. How could she look stunning covered in blood?
Also....when he whacks the zombies head off with the golf club....he should yell......."FORE".
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Well to describe someone as stunning when they are covered in blood is just a writers way of adding to character perhaps...