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Gore, it grabbed my attention and kept it while I read, so that is awesome. My only dislike and loss of full submersion into the story (and this might change if you clarify it for me) is that I did not quite understand why Vincent (and Skylar) was/were killing so many people on the highways in the first place; I did not understand the reason behind it. Even if there was supposed to be no real reason, that was not made clear to me. Something always triggers someone to kill, right (whether mental unbalance or revenge or being a monsterish freak, etc.)? I got why he killed Skylar, but not everyone else prior to that.
Nice work!
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