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Old 10-03-2007, 08:31 AM
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For some reason I was expecting him to wake up to find his dead wife beside him or something, don't know why, got a strange imagination.

But your story did at least make me think about something, so it pretty much works.

Why call the dog "Sweet Pea"? Not exactly a common name for a dog.
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You kids keep your noses clean you understand? You'll be hearing from me if you don't. We ain't gonna stand for any weirdness out here.

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