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Originally Posted by Shadow
I dont think I was trying to write a haiku lol.
Cool though.
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Technically it wasn't.
You wrote 4 5 6. (syllables)
Haikus are 5 7 5.
But it is pretty good.
haikus suck anyway :p
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