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Originally Posted by Rob Bottin
When he turned around he could only see a sharp light making him blind and then it came, from a razorblad it hitted him over the throat and the blood started to spray, Bark fell to the ground, running for the light as he passed away forever...
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{I think this post should not be included in this story as the poster has not only not contributed anything previously, but in one run-on sentence, kills off a major character with a weapon, which was previously stated in the prior post: does not exist! There are no weapons here and they are alone, and this does not fit with the previous linear flow of the story.}