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Originally Posted by ferretchucker
As the blood dripped down the womans arm, she began to fall sioently into a trance like state. That smell, that feeling, the sound of it dripping, the beautiful colour and that amazing refreshing taste. The warm red mercury finally filling her senses once more, she was unaware of the teenagers looking back, horrified at the sight. She suddenly stepped back, a terrified expression on her pale, soft face. The blood was dark, it was a killers blood. The woman fell backwards as the blood seeped into her pourous skin as she became a creature of the night.
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In the darkness, the two teenagers, Nadia and Tristan, gripped each other in terror. They stood frozen as they watched the woman start to change. The woman's body shuddered as dark, thick hairs started growing out of her skin, her nails turning to claws, her nose and jaw lengthening into a muzzle--she was becoming a wolf!
The clouds in the sky parted revealing a bright full moon, illuminating the wolf now as it rose and howled deeply. Nadia finally broke from her frozen state and screamed.
[Bleeding Angel-
It's never too late to learn how to write well. Unlike some of the other things we learned in school growing up, you will use your writing skills all your life.
Here is a link to the Merriam-Webster's Dictionary:
http://www.m-w.com. I use this website all the time to check words when I am uncertain of their spelling. It's really a great resource because they have a Thesaurus too.
Here's another really great website on sentence structure and punctuation:
http://www.edufind.com/english/grammar/index.cfm.
Hope this helps!]