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Originally Posted by alkytrio666
Well, if you really want to get better, you start by using periods to eliminate your run-ons and uppercasing the first letter in your sentences.
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Im bad with trying to figure out were the period should go, or were this thing goes> (,). I seriously need my own editor or some thing, because these windows to typ in dont have spell check, and im to use to having it.
But i do apoligize if my posts confuses some ill try my best.
Was this one a little better?
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