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A good start.
I agree with most of the comments above and would like to add that the title is too on the nose. It eliminates any suspense of mystery and sounds like a slasher comedy, which is obviously not the intended tone. The title doesn't jive with the images, especially since there isn't a hint of BBQ in the trailer.
The title need to be enticing, not revealing...just my two cents.
But keep it up. Trial and error is how we all grow as artists.
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