Sorry, but using "classic" horror movie music thrown over any footage, no matter how many effects, doesn't make it a horror film. This looks like backyard wrestling in the kitchen played under a Pink Floyd light show. There is no suspense, urgency or shot selection to it. 2 guys hitting each other is more like an episode of 'Jackass'. Pace a scene out. Use intersting angles. Learn to cut a sequence. If you've been playing with the effects already, you know your way around NLE a bit already.
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