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Since you asked....
The most obvious problem is lack of any dialogue or narrative. This tends to scream "no plot !" to me. If the trailer was loaded with some good scares/suspense, I could get past it. It's not. There's no mood to it. The 'TCM' sound effect worked in 'TCM' due to the lighting and shot sequence. Here it seems random. Flat lighting in garage with Insane Clown Posse looking guys doesn't go anywhere. The opening shots do. Build on that. Just my two cents.
CK
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