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Originally Posted by Horror_Writer
Excellent writing--quite polished for a first draft, if that's what it is.
I definitely got a great sense of the character. I was surprised when I learned he was only 37. I felt he was much older than that, and maybe that is what you intended--I think it is.
Might be a bit stereotypical (aged rock star, feeling lonely, used, spent), but it seems to be working so far.
Good luck on finishing it up!
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Thanks, it is a first draft...and I've never approached the form before. I've been a songwriter-turned screenwriter. I just really want to try this, see ifI can do it, you know, always searching for the next challenge.
Now I just need the time and motivation to complete it - too many other deadlines!:eek:
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