[stygianwitch]

i liked this one, i especially like the way it ends, makes a nice change for the human to lose

with a little work i think it would make a good novel, IMO, you'd need a prologue to cover the early 'bear attacks', some back story about the disappearances and how Glen got involved in the job, and then flesh it out

just remember that mine is a readers opinion, i'm not a writer, never likely to be, but i love reading these stories

nice one, keep it up :)