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Thank you. :D
I thrive on feedback, especially good, but i alweays love to hear "This could have been different".
I basically wrote it as it came out, but reading back through it, i think i was going for the old Lovecraftian "Non-specific narrarator" feel, however he has plenty where there is a specific character narrating so that isnt a great excuse...
I will try to give it a little rework.
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