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They put your name in the credits? What'd you get? A writing credit? Story credit? Something else?
Your ending (and story) sounds better. The way this ended was the 2 main good characters & the 1 main bad character were in a standoff on the last remaining floating boat. The Bad guy had the girl at gunpoint then the squid came up and pulled them both into the water & killed the bad guy. The squid then attacked the good guy who managed to trap a tentacle in some kind of cable roller of some sort and then proceeded to shoot the squid about a dozen times and it died. :rolleyes: Then his boat started sinking so he got on the liferaft and as he drifted, he heard the good girl yelling for help. He pulled her into the raft and they floated until morning before getting rescued. Like I said, pretty anti-climactic.
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