[stygianwitch]

That was good, held my interest to the end....i love the end. I like the way you describe their feelings and reactions, too many people rush through that when writing but your description of how she felt when she saw the thing in the closet was perfect, it set my heart racing, it was so accurate i have to ask...have you ever seen anything like that?

Keep at it, there's a really good story there...make a great movie, very atmospheric :D