[Zero]

how remarkably articulate you are - truly Capote has been reincarnated in your literary self.

odd though - you beg us to read your story, are confused when I give you my opinion (that is that the story has no characterization, silly plot, no real conflict or development, and sloppy writing), then become aggressive (and, in fairness, aggressive in the most banal and pedestrian way - surely a 'published writer' could be a bit more inventive and cutting in his invectives - sheesh)