Thanks, you guys. I agree with you, BC. My problem is that I never take the time to sit down and write them out, I just get an idea and peck on the keyboard and post it. When your butt starts getting numb, the story gets more hurried. I think I'm gonna sit down the old fashioned way with a pen and a piece of paper and do it right.:)
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I'll kill you and your dreams tonight
Begin new life
Bleed your death upon me
Let your bloodline feed my youth
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