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Maybe you should introduce one at a time. Anyway, I like the first concept and then the own involving rape with the mother and daughter.
I would write a short story on the first or let it get into a novel. If you going for a scene play this might be good. However, you will need to add many twist so this doesn't become cliché or predictable.
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