05-03-2006, 11:59 PM
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Therapy?
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Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Seattle
Posts: 1,818
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Originally posted by The Flayed One
Much better! When I read the beginning now, before he goes to the bar, Clay seems like a real person to me. Bravo!
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agreed.
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