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Originally posted by pinkfloyd45769
I love it!! The only thing that is bugging me is what Clay says to Nathan before shooting himself. I think he should say something that would leave a real impact on the poor kid. I really like this idea though, the best i've read on here imo. :)
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Yeah, that was one line I was trying to come up with something better for too. Whatever line I end up using will definately play a part later on in the script too so it needs to something memorable.
Also , thanks for the kind words! Much appreciated. :D