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As Silver Shamrock pointed out to me earlier this week, it made no sense since so much of it was seen in the first person POV. She couldn't have "seen" the killer if she was the killer. Too bad. The pacing, etc in it was right on to begin with even if the story itself lacked because of "killer's " motives.
I should avoid this thread since I can complain a lot LOL
CK
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