05-03-2006, 07:11 AM
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No charge for awesomeness
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Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: St. Paul
Posts: 11,210
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Originally posted by The Flayed One
Much better! When I read the beginning now, before he goes to the bar, Clay seems like a real person to me. Bravo!
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Thanks!
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