I posted this where it belongs (Filmmaker's Forum) but no one really goes there all that often so after a little thought, I decided to post it here as well.
I am in the process of writing a screenplay (My 1st feature length) and I just completed the 1st rough draft of the 1st scene and would really like any and all feedback (positive or negative) anyone can offer. So if it's not too much trouble, please click the link below, which will take you over to the thread in the Filmmaker's Forum, give it a quick read (It's pretty short) and let me know what you think.
http://www.horror.com/forum/showthre...105#post420105
Thanks!
P.S. If you are someone that can not stand me or I have been an asshole to over the years, you're still welcome to come check it out too. Think of this as your chance to tear me to shreds while I stand idley by and take it all with a smile in the name of constructive criticism.
:D