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Originally posted by The_Return
Thanks alot man! Any suggestion on forums or something where I might be able to find some of the bands/artists?
Another thing:
This wont pose a problem until I actually film the thing, which wont be anytime soon, but there's one part Im not sure how to shoot. I'll copy/paste the passage from the story:
"The rain was cold that night, but Victor would have given most anything to feel it beating down on his face. He must have blacked out, he couldn’t tell where he was or how long he’d been there. It seemed like a small pit, or a grave of some sort. The lack of oxygen was wreaking havoc on his mind, and suddenly, as though watching a movie, he saw himself less than a full day ago, happily at his home..."
Basically, how would I be able to show him burried in the grave?
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What I'd do is this:
As a shoking, final scene, show a very, very close shot of maybe just hid eyes, opening. Then show his eyes slowly evolve to a terror-stricken look.
Then cut to a scene of a coffin, not showing where it is, just enough pan to show that he is indeed in a closed coffin. (He doesn't have to be shown, just the coffin does).
Finally, cut to a shot of the ground, a little overturned soil. The audience will get the hint that there is a coffin uder there.
Then the camera could go black, and we'd hear a scream in the dark. And then the credits come a-rollin'.
But that's just a suggestion.