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It's not bad. Not my taste in poetry though.
Here's one.....
Re-Awakened to the darkness
Black is all I see
Standing in the corner
A shadowy figure staring back at me
How did I get here
And what are my options
In this black abyss
I am at a loss of thoughts
Knowing my time is near
Heavy breathing is all I hear
Finding nothing to bring the light
I will not find myself in this darkness
^^^^ That I just wrote sitting here.
Here is a shorter one. Somtimes poem's should be short. It makes them better a lot of times.
In my heart, I feel a pain
Painted wrists, With dried Bloodstains
Hear my cries, And leave me alone
Your true innerself, You have shown
These are more of my style.
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