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Old 02-21-2006, 06:50 AM
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Two tips:

- Dont focus so much on rhyme scheme
- Longer is rarely better

Here's a poem that I wrote that you might like:


Have You Ever...?

Have you ever sat down
With nothing to do, simply
An intent
to write

Have you ever stared
At the blank page, wondering
Why Bother?
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