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Honestly, it made me uncomfortable ;)...I don't know...the whole violence against women thing or something...the subject matter, about the thoughts of rape, etc...and I definately don't think that YOU think that way...I'm perfectly aware it's just a charachter. I just get really uncomfortable watching/reading anything that has to do with that subject...I get that way watching/reading anything that has to do with torture as well...probably why I never went to see "SAW" ;) So honestly, it's more the subject matter that didn't sit well with me...it has nothing to do with your talent as a writer.
You have alot of potential....you definately know how to use imagery to get your point across! I liked the style it was written in as well...dark, gothic...for some reason it reminds me of Poe :) I'd be interested in reading other stories of yours.
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