[cole]

Hi, to all the horror fans. I'm currently studing 'writing' and hopefully one of my novels or scripts when finished will take off one day...I've been practising my so called 'art' in form of novel writing, poetry and lyrical rhymes.
This is the first piece of poetry I'm displaying to the public and would like the truth...if u like it ...GREAT... but if u don't...thats fine too; you will only help strenghten my back bone!!!

Here goes:

The darkened cloud covers the moon that shines
Smothering coulor and all that is devine
Evil delivers midnight as the clock chimes
Shadows crawl and start to climb.

The dead will soon come out to play
Emotions run high from the murder of the day
Tears now fall from 'blood shed' they say
Truth is hidden; protecting those who will eventually pay.

Cheers for the feedback
-cole-