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Originally posted by Twisted666
Hi I'm a kid who's loved horror movies since I saw the Shining when I was 6, and I'm working on a script for a movie which I will be showing to my friends. The movie itself is called Blood On The Ceiling, and what it's inspired by is all the great phsycological horror films such as The Shining, Don't Look Now, and some more recent movies like Ringu and 28 Days Later.
Opening Scene:
(Shot of a door. Throughout the scene, the camera is zooming out, and the music is getting gradually more and more violent. The muffled voices of an arguing couple can be heard.)
Man- "You're not leaving this fucking house Maxine! I want the truth!"
Maxine- "Will you just fuck off? I'm not telling you shit!"
Man- "Oh yeah? Well I have six people who all say they saw you kissing him."
Maxine- "I fucked him."
Man- "What!"
Maxine- "You heard me. I fucked him."
Man- "You little whore!!!"
Maxine- "Oh christ..... NO!!!!"
(Blood leaks through the crack in the door. A faint screaming can be heard. Screaming stops. Screen fades to black. Blood On The Ceiling appears on the screen.)
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The script isn't very detailed. Like ADOM said, what's going on with it? Don't scripts have like the speaking parts and detail on what the characters are doing like, ":lips curl, grits teeth, hands clench into tight fists: "WHAT?!" for example?