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Originally posted by AUSTIN316426808
I think you would get a jump from some people if the first thing that happens is a loud scream but besides that it sounded boring and the killers line was rather lame.
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Well as I said before, this is my first so dont expect much from me right now, i still have tons and tons of work to do to the whole thing.
g star , thanks alot for your comments
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Hang the body in the shed
Using meat-hooks through the legs
Catch the blood as it drips from the stump
Like the others from the past
The naked belly, full of cysts
Smells so good, I cant resist
I know inside this ones the best
As I eat the rotting chest
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