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Old 01-13-2004, 09:16 PM
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Originally posted by bloodygurl02
ok hers my atempt bloodrayne:

having a lil trouble remebering the story completey but here it goes.

jack goes up the bean stalk to a dark wasteland of bones w/ blood every where. the giants is now a a blood thirsty mutated giant and he eats jack and climbs down the bean stalk and kills the whole village.

it may not b the greatest but its waht i could come up w/ for now its been a while since i last read jack and the beanstalk. if any one wants to add more to what i came up w/ feel free to

Really interesting concept and good attempt...I was thinking more along the lines of...

The "giant" is just a regular guy like us...Jack is the menace...He comes from some microcosm...The beanstalk is just a normal beanstalk in the "giant"'s garden...Jack's people are starving...The "magic beans" are regular beans that one of his people found...Anyway...looking for ANY solution to the starvation problem...He climbs up...Sees this guy has MASSIVE amounts of food..."Golden Eggs" becomes a metaphor based on the fact that just one goose egg could feed his entire village, thereby making them valuable...Jack kills the guy...takes his stuff...The sheriff and townspeople in our world are completely baffled...The people in Jack's subterranian world want more stuff...Huge battle with the little people insues...Much murder and mayhem...

Any thoughts?
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