You're lucky I'm not as hardened as the rest. :p
"Tammy's Slumber Party"
The music is too distracting, the beginning argument etc. was funny and realistic but I don't think it worked for me. With very few exceptions, I think you should put a lot more thought into framing the shots. I know it's just a super low budget short film, but please, don't let that stop you from using a tripod and putting the time and effort into it. Some parts worked well, I couldn't watch it to the end though, sorry. :(
I might check some of the others out later.