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Originally posted by Spy Crouch
I read only one story, but from that, your dialogue does little to provide insight into any of the characters. In a short story, that's one of few ways to do so. Work on that.
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Thanks for the feedback. My wife also mentioned that in "Justice" the villain didnt have enough back story to really hate, so a re-write is definatley in order there.
Which story did you read, btw?