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Old 01-04-2004, 02:29 PM
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Script Continued.

Here's a little more. Of course I'm going to stop short of the ending hehehe. And thanks for the comments !
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INT. KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

TOM is looking around the kitchen.

TOM
(loudly)
Hey Michael ?

No response.

TOM(CONT)
(louder)
Mike ?!

No response.

TOM(CONT)
Answer me !

No response.

TOM takes another look around the kitchen.

TOM(CONT)
Mike !?

No response.

TOM angrily goes out into the ...

INT. HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS

TOM looks up and down the hallway.

TOM
Mike !

No response.

TOM(CONT)
This is really not funny !

TOM heads toward the ...

INT. BEE ROOM - CONTINUOUS

MICHAEL is not there.

TOM looks around.

TOM
(panic)
Mike !

Someone walks past the door.

TOM turns.

He goes to the ...

INT. HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS

TOM looks around.

TOM
What the hell ?

MICHEAL is suddenly behind TOM.

MICHAEL
Boo !

TOM turns and punches MICHAEL in the face.

MICHAEL(CONT)
What the fuck was that for !?

TOM
I told you not to sneak up on me, look we
better leave this house

MICHAEL
You didn't have to hit me, asshole

TOM
I'm leaving

MICHAEL
Don't you want to take a look around ?

TOM
I don't think so

MICHAEL
You're really scared aren't you ?

TOM
(lying)
No

MICHAEL
Bullshit, look I'm gonna take another look
around, this place is definately creepy

TOM
Something bad happened here

MICHAEL
Yeah you punched me in the face

TOM
There's blood in the toilet

MICHAEL
What ?

TOM
There's blood in the toilet, and I think one
or two body parts

MICHAEL
Body parts ?

TOM
Go look for yourself

MICHAEL
Wait here

TOM
I'm not moving

MICHAEL goes into the bathroom.

MICHAEL(OS)
Jesus

TOM
See

Silence.

TOM(CONT)
C'mon let's get the hell out of here

Silence.

TOM(CONT)
C'mon asshead I ain't got all day

Silence.

TOM goes to the bathrroom door. It's empty.

TOM(CONT)
What ...

TOM cannot believe what he's seeing.

TOM(CONT)
Oh this is bad

TOM turns and suddenly he's ...

INT. BEE ROOM - CONTINUOUS

In the bee room.

He looks around.

TOM
God
(beat)
What is this place

Someone walks behind him, down the hall.

TOM immediately follows to ...

INT. HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS

Empty.

TOM
Oh God what's happening

The sound of an electric knife in another room.

TOM jerks around.

TOM(CONT)
(rage/panic)
Who's there ?!

TOM is trying to regain his composure. He's terrified but
trying to hold everything together.

TOM(CONT)
Gotta find Mike, gotta find Mike, okay, um,
okay this isn't happening it really isn't

TOM looks around and heads toward the kitchen.

INT. KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

The knife is sitting on the floor, where it was before.
Running.

TOM
Okay then
(beat)
Mike ?! ... Mike answer me goddamn it !

Silence.

TOM(CONT)
Walk out, walk out of the house, leave the
house, don't turn around, Michael wants to
play goddamn games, fine he can stay here

TOM leaves the kitchen but he's suddenly ...

INT. KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

Entering the kitchen.

TOM is knocked off his feet by complete shock. He looks around
in terror.

MICHAEL calls from another room.

MICHAEL(OS)
Hey Tom !?

TOM
(standing quickly)
Mike ?!

MICHAEL(OS)
Where the hell are you ?!

TOM
(shaky)
I'm in the kitchen

INT. THE SHIRT ROOM - CONTINUOUS

MICHAEL standing there, studying everything.

MICHAEL
Look I think we better get out of here !

TOM(OS)
I can't !

MICHAEL
What ?!

INT. KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

TOM
(not sure what to say or do)
Come to the kitchen !

Silence.

TOM(CONT)
Michael !

Silence.

INT. THE SHIRT ROOM - CONTINUOUS

MICHAEL
(to himself)
We really shouldn't be yelling
(beat)
There's someone in the house

TOM(OS)
Michael !

MICHAEL
(screaming)
What ?!

TOM(OS)
Who's in here with us ?!

MICHAEL
I don't know !
(softly)
But we're not getting out alive ... that's
for damn sure
INT. KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

TOM is looking around.

TOM
Michael !?

MICHAEL(OS)
What ?!

TOM
I'm gonna try and leave the kitchen again
!?, go to the hallway

MICHAEL(OS)
What do you mean you're going to try and
leave the kitchen again ?!, what's happening
?!

TOM
(quietly)
Fucked if i know

TOM looks at the kitchen door and barges right through it into
...

INT. HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS

TOM
(relief)
Thank God, Mike ?

No response.

TOM(CONT)
Mike where are you ?

No response.

TOM(CONT)
Look asshole this isn't funny, answer me !

No response.

TOM(CONT)
(quietly to himself)
What room did he say he was in ?, uhm, the
bee room, i'll try the bee room

INT. BEE ROOM - MOMENTS LATER

TOM enters the empty bee room. He walks in and turns around.

TOM
Mike ?!

No response.

INT. HALLWAY - MOMENTS LATER

TOM steps into the hallway and looks across it's length.

TOM
Mike ?!

No response.

TOM(CONT)
What the hell is happening, Jesus
(beat)
(screaming)
MIKE ?!

No response.

INT. THE SHIRT ROOM - MOMENTS LATER

TOM moves into the shirt room.

Empty.

INT. BATHROOM - MOMENTS LATER

TOM peers into the bathroom. Nothing.

INT. HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS

TOM
I'm getting the hell outta here

TOM marches toward the porch and goes right to ...

INT. THE SHIRT ROOM - CONTINUOUS

TOM looks around and a strangled sob of anguish escapes his
thraot. He's finally starting to actually lose it.

TOM
GOD !
(beat)
MIKE !?!?!!?, MIKE !?!?!!?

Silence.

Someone walks behind him in the hall.

He turns.

TOM(CONT)
(crazed)
Who's there ?!

TOM roars into the ...


INT. HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS

Empty.

TOM looks up and down the empty hallway. He's manic now.

TOM
(quietly)
The back door

TOM heads for the back door and promptly enters ...

INT. KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

TOM is shocked.

TOM
No !!!!, let us out !!!!, let us out !!!!!

He rips off his backpack and begins to violently beat at the
cupboards. As he does this he makes repeated demands to be let
out. He continues assaulting the cupboard until he exhausts himself and falls to his knees.

TOM(CONT)
(panting)
When the son of a bitch, who's keeping us
here, i'm gonna cut his goddamn throat

Someone walks down the hall. TOM looks up. It's a giant hulk of
a man in tattered clothes. TOM is not even sure if it is a man.
He's too scared to move despite his words.

MICHAEL(OS)
Tom !

TOM looks around. He can no longer believe his eyes or ears.
He's not sure if that's Michael now at all despite the fact
that it's obviously his voice.

MICHAEL(CONT)(OS)
Tom !!, where are you ?!

TOM
M-Michael ?!

MICHAEL(OS)
Where are you ?!

TOM looks around.

TOM
I-i ... I'm in the kitchen !

No more response.

TOM
Mike !? .... Goddamnit answer me !

MICHAEL(OS)
Help me !

TOM moves before thinking.

He roars into ...

INT. HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS

He looks around.

TOM
Where are you ?!

No response.

TOM(CONT)
Goddamnit where are you ?!

No response.

A girl appears in the doorway.

MARY-BETH
Can i help you with somthing ?

TOM turns. Is the girl really there ?.

TOM
Who are you ?

MARY-BETH
Well Jesus you look like freshly warmed
death

TOM
What did you do with Michael ?

MARY-BETH
I haven't the foggiest idea what you're
talking about, who's Michael

TOM
Who lives here ?, who lives in this house,
answer me

MARY-BETH
You ask a lot of questions

TOM
Answer me

MARY-BETH
Sometimes, that's no good

Close on TOM. Then back to the doorway. The girl is gone.

TOM races to the front door but ...

--To Be Continued-- Enjoy !
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