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Originally posted by devilsbackbone
i dont remember when it was or when it all started but all i kno is if u listen real close to the wind on january first you can still hear her scream and you can still smell her blood. she died in spite and hasnt left since, i dont think she ever will. all she wants is forgivness and she cant have it because she was tortured to death and still is tortured. life isnt pretty and neither is the after life. i hope shes alright............................?:(
ok so its not true and i made it up off the top of my head but is it good?
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I would say that you've got the beginnings or endings of a good story.
So tell us, why is she so mad? How'd she die? Is her dying the last thing that happens, or the first? Essentially will the story be about her or people dealing with her ghost....(like The Ring..."you weren't supposed to help her!" *shivers*)