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Originally posted by Hate_Breeder
©copyright Sexual Mechanic 2005
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I know it sucks but it was my first at attempting to write a song for our band.
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Sexual Mechanic! is that you're band name? I don't know if thats suppose too be serious but thats funny.
I don't think those are bad at all. you should you more visual images. Like Colors or describing thoughts in a metaphor.
some bands have good lyrics.
I think SOME of Danzigs work was really good (not all) but some.