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Old 01-23-2005, 09:04 AM
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Ill step up to the plate.


I throughly enjoyed both of these stories. Very engrossing, I wasnt all to interested when forst reading Bearfoot, yet your unique style of writing kept me reading on, until I was too hooked to stop. It would have been nice to have had the physical description of Glen closer to the 1st, the rest of the setting was beautifuly described, I could see it as clearly as looking out my window. But until nearly halfway through the story, Glen was merely a nondescript, generic looking man, as I had no way of knowing how he looked. Personally, I much prefered Bearfoot over Father Dillon's Funeral, but both were very enjoyable. Bearwood was much more original I thought. Im looking forward to reading more of your work [Im about to start reading Gloom:cool: ]
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